My edit

Here's my quick edit.  It may be too dark??  Its a beautiful picture, though!!!  I adore the light :-)

Does this work?

Does this work?  I can't get it to feel right.  I was trying to do a backlit shot but I just couldn't get enough light on her face and the sun was just too strong.  I ended up moving after this shot but when I was culling I kept going back to it.  I just love something about it...but I can't seem to get it to work.

Any suggestions?